SPILER SPOILERS SPOILERS (just skip if your now reading...)
oh see no one noticed the whole dream -black borders thing because the panel were you shows minato's hand grabbing the bedsheets should have faded back to white. that would have definately been noticable
wood jutsu??? well.... i think that's a big error.... only the 1st and yamato can actualy use that.... it's a cool manga, but it could be better without this little errors..... you can switch the wood with earth or water jutsu... even wind could be greet! wood jutsu is just a big mess in the Back-ground.... your work is still very good, i like it very much
Hahha, yeah I know that mokuton was Shodaime's ability only - but I couldn't find sth more suitable for this situation (wind? Fire?). Let's pretend that bamboo is not a "proper" wood, but a kind of doton XD
action packed and exciting.
Great job.
I give "YG: chap 3 - pg 5" by kunoichi-san on deviant art a 4 out of 5.
oh see no one noticed the whole dream -black borders thing because the panel were you shows minato's hand grabbing the bedsheets should have faded back to white. that would have definately been noticable
wood jutsu is just a big mess in the Back-ground....
your work is still very good, i like it very much